Here is my atempt at editing. Feedback anyone? The first one is SOOC, the second is Photo
The title has double edged meaning. One, it loooks like Jakob might be a bit startled, and two, can you see the differences in the two pics, and are the changes good. Plus, what else can I do to help it out.
Also, apparently, it's delurking day...so if you have never, or even if you just rarely make comments....SPEAK UP......please.
Thank you very much.